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 # [MosaicML Platform for Multinode Orchestration](https://mcli.docs.mosaicml.com/en/latest/getting_started/installation.html)
 
-The MosaicML Platform enables you to easily train large AI models on your data, in your secure environment.
+The proprietary MosaicML Platform enables you to easily train large AI models on your data, in your secure environment.
 
-Train large AI models at scale with a single command. Point to your S3 bucket and go. We handle the rest — orchestration, efficiency, node failures, infrastructure. 
-Simple and scalable.
+With the MosaicML Platform, you can train large AI models at scale with a single command. We handle the rest — orchestration, efficiency, node failures, infrastructure. 
 
-Seamlessly integrate with your existing workflows, experiment trackers, and data pipelines. 
-Our platform is fully interoperable, cloud agnostic, and enterprise proven.
+Our platform is fully interoperable, cloud agnostic, and enterprise proven. It also seamlessly integrate with your existing workflows, experiment trackers, and data pipelines.